And Chapter 2 is now up. The manuscript grew shorter again, but it defiantly is helping to streamline the entire thing. In this chapter, Zhyx goes to confront the matriarch of all dragons after the opening intrusion in his layer. This latest version was shortened by around two thousand words, knocking roughly four pages off this chapter to bring it down to fifteen pages in 1.5 spacing. This chapter serves primarily as character development and exposition, but hopefully it gives the feeling these two dragons have a history.
Enjoy and let me know what you think.